One eyed Impasse sees doctor...
Here's the script:
PAGE ONE (five panels)
Panel 2. (Impasse's POV) We see the Doctor as if he was peering into our eye with a little light.
Panel 3. (Doc's POV) We see Impasse's eye socket bleeding, missing his eye. There are blood vessels & stuff hanging out since the eye was yanked out. Impasse turns his head away slightly. We probably see the Doc's hand raising Impasse's eye brow to get a better look.
Panel 4. The Doctor lowers his little light as he talks with Impasse.
Panel 5. Similar camera angle to last panel. Now, Doc stands up straight, and puts his fists on his hips (he's confused, and trying to figure something out).
PAGE TWO (six panels)
Panel 2. The Doctor has pulled a small kitchen-size blowtorch out of a kitchen drawer. He also holds a small flint tool near the business end of the blowtorch.
Panel 3. In the foreground, the blowtorch flares on. In the background, Impasse looks toward the flame. The flame here is the initial "on" flare, so it's a bit bigger than the usual blowtorch fire.
Panel 4. The Doctor holds the blowtorch about head level as he adjusts the nozzle on it.
Panel 5. The Doctor puts his free hand on Impasse's head (to steady himself) as he brings the torch flame *almost* within reach of Impasse's eye.
Panel 6. Impasse grits his teeth (it hurts!) as the Doctor blowtorches his eye! I don't want to show anything graphically here, so we need it to be obvious what is happening without showing the flame on the eye. Perhaps have the gory stuff just a bit off panel (focus on Imp's teeth maybe).
PAGE THREE (six panels)
Panel 2. Close up of the Doctor working on the eye, probably from Impasse's POV.
Panel 3. Close up on the good side of Impasse's face. He frowns and sneers with his nose. He's giving the Doctor an angry / ugly look. (Probably the Doc's POV here). (no dialogue here)
Panel 4. Close up shot of the Doctor working (even closer than last time).
Panel 5. Close up shot of good side of Impasse's face (even closer than Imp's last panel).
Panel 6. Impasse backhands the doctor, sending him tumbling over a kitchen countertop. The blowtorch goes flying out of Doc's hand.
PAGE FOUR (six panels)
Panel 2. Same exact shot as last time, but now we see one of Impasse's massive hands on the countertop (as he leans over). We see the doctor just now starting to sit up, and he looks up with a frightened look on his face.
Panel 3. (Doctor's POV) We look up to see the shadowy form of Impasse leaning over with his fist raised.
Panel 4. We now see Impasse punching down (on the doctor) - as the kitchen counter blocks our view of anything gory.
Panel 5. Impasse wipes the blood off his fist with a kitchen rag (which is tiny to his big hands)
Panel 6. Close or medium shot. Impasse has now picked up the still-burning blowtorch and gets it *close* to his eye without touching the flame yet.